Our students see this a lot, whether it be on our reading assessments (good 'ol DRA2), in our own classrooms, or on our state assessments (although, last I looked, they were switching things up a bit saying things like "paraphrase" or "find the main idea." Well, which one is it? Let's keep it simple folks.)
I got a few, THAT'S IT? and WHERE HAS THIS BEEN ALL MY LIFE! comments. I was cracking up. Unfortunately my friends, this is just the beginning.
Questions I asked my readers today: What happens when the author does not use the format of problem-solution? What about when an author doesn't present the information in the exact order that the graphic organizer is laid out? What happens when the author doesn't come out and neatly provide the reader with any of the above information but instead uses figurative language or forces the reader to infer things like problems and solutions?
The above questions will be our next feat to tackle! But, until then, we are practicing, practicing, and practicing some more!
What are some tips and tricks you use for teaching higher level summary writing and non-fiction summary writing?
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Bottom line, we want our kids to be proficient (and feel confident) in taking out the important elements from a piece of text, both fiction and non-fiction. We want our zealous little readers to be able to get at the heart of the matter when writing summaries, and we want them to be able to do it in as few words as possible. Unfortunately, we sometimes forget that our students need to be taught "HOW" to break down a larger piece of text into a short, brief, to the point summary. Piece of cake, right?! Oy...
So, here we are! I must say, our summary writing is most definitely a work in progress, but I am proud of the hard work my kids put in so far!
Here's what the beginning of our unit looked like:
I broke this unit into two separate mini-units. One for fiction summary writing
and another for non-fiction summary writing. This blog post will be entirely devoted to the beginning stages of our fiction summaries.
I decided on a
very specific format for writing our fiction summaries, the very
popular “Someone, Wanted, But, So, Then”. This summarizing strategy comes from an older book titled; Responses to Literature. Good lord those authors were on to something! ;) Obviously since the whole problem-solution narrative format tends to be the easiest, being that my kids have so much background knowledge on it, I figured this would be a great place to start.
I have seen so many AWESOME organizers using this strategy all over the blog world, and I assure you teacher friends it's for a reason, because this
little phrase is AMAZING! I found this FREE graphic organizer courtesy of One Happy Teacher. Click the picture below to check out her blog and to grab this freebie!
I expanded the above graphic organizer onto our anchor chart to introduce this strategy to my students and to really drive home the ideas of summarizing fiction.
With the first lesson, we discussed narrative text vs. expository text, and more specifically discussed the narrative format of problem-solution.
I did a very brief mini-lesson revisiting mentor texts that we had already used, to discuss the problem-solution structure of narratives. I discussed that
narratives are “stories” and should be read as such. We discussed that it is
important to pay attention to events
in a story versus taking out facts when reading a non-fiction or expository text.
Here are the mentor texts we used:
Although the above books are great books to use for this unit, I did not use them for the purpose of summary writing. Instead, I chose a chapter out of our current read aloud: Among the Hidden by Margaret Haddix. I chose this because my
kids’ biggest problem with writing fiction summaries is that they include irrelevant information. By choosing a chapter from a book that we are currently reading, a lot of the details are fresh in their minds and I can easily note where they're adding in extra or irrelevant details.
To start, I copied the chapter, passed it out, and gave each student a copy of the above graphic organizer. Some students felt confident enough to fill it out as we read, others needed my help.
After reading the passage, we walked slowly through each of the steps below:
First, we identified the
character in relation to the problem of the text. I broke it down like this: The character that is “going through something” is the Someone.
Second, we discussed that what the character wanted, or what their goal was, (in relation to the problem) is the Wanted.
Next, we worked to figure out what the obstacle was that was getting in the way of the character reaching their goal, and identified this as the But.
Then, we pulled out what the character did or how
they reacted to the problem they were facing as the the So.
Lastly, we agreed on the solution to the problem or the outcome as the Then.
Lastly, we agreed on the solution to the problem or the outcome as the Then.
It was hard for some, but when I showed them how you could take those individual sticky notes and put them together to write a summary, they were pretty flabbergasted!
Questions I asked my readers today: What happens when the author does not use the format of problem-solution? What about when an author doesn't present the information in the exact order that the graphic organizer is laid out? What happens when the author doesn't come out and neatly provide the reader with any of the above information but instead uses figurative language or forces the reader to infer things like problems and solutions?
The above questions will be our next feat to tackle! But, until then, we are practicing, practicing, and practicing some more!
What are some tips and tricks you use for teaching higher level summary writing and non-fiction summary writing?
My latest Valentine product is UP FOR YOU TO GRAB: Valentine Coordinate Graphing Ordered Pairs {Mystery Pictures}. I made these with 5 pictures: 3 pictures in quadrant 1-4, and 2 pictures in quadrant 1.
The first 3 readers to leave me tips and tricks for summary writing, leave your email and I'll send you a free copy! I'll be adding my Valentine Math Centers, Activities and Games Pack next! Stay tuned...


















18 comments:
This is a great post! You are a fabulous blogger! You should see about publishing your ideas. You really have a way with words.
I also teach my kids the SWBST strategy but we also add a Finally onto it to sum up the story in one more final way.
For non-fiction, I teach my kids to find key words then turn the key words into a summary.
Jennifer
Teaching to Inspire in 5th
I use the same format as well, but I added a 'finally' to help my kids wrap up their thinking. I like to use picture books that I've read to them to do as a whole class lesson...I think they remember those the best!
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:) Kaitlyn
Smiles and Sunshine
I use a graphic organizer, but I think I like this one better! We also use stickies. We do a lot of summarizing in our responses to text :)
Thanks for your comments ladies, and for reading my blog!
I do like the "finally" idea and was thinking about adding this element in this week since my kids feel confident with what we've done thus far!
@Kristen- I should own a percentage of Post-Its since I use them so much. ;)
The coordinate mystery pictures are on the way!
I think the key is doing it over and over, starting with smaller picture type books and then expanding into chapter books. Lots of modeling!
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I just found that summarizing organizer last week and I LOVE it!! It's so helpful for my students, plus it allows them to start writing independently without saying "I don't know what to wriiiiite" (can you hear that voice in your head? lol) I love the chart you made to go with it! I may do that this week! =)
Ashley
The Resource Room Teacher
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Thanks so much for your comments ladies! You're right about going slow and modeling Suzy! It has gone VERY slow, but I am so happy I took so much time to model it with my kids, because it's paying off!
@Ashley- I can totally hear it! ;) Isn't this graphic organizer the best? Thank you for your comment!
Wow! It's seriously hard to believe that you're a "young" teacher. You have such great ideas... I don't think you need many tips or tricks! =) I absolutely love this way of summarizing!It makes it a lot easier for them to understand. My kids struggle with taking this type of organizer and then writing the summary. They are a few years younger than yours though, so I don't feel so bad. I'll just keep modeling, modeling, modeling. =) Keep up the amazing work!
-Jackie-
Sister Teachers
I teach summarizing A LOT to my kiddos and really appreciate your thorough and informative post. I will definitely be trying these ideas.
The REAL Teachers of Orange County
@Jackie- That is the sweetest thing. I AM a young teacher (well...4th year now!) I appreciate your kind comments, they mean so much! My kids struggled SO much too in the beginning, but when I kept modeling and practicing with them day after day we had some MAJOR breakthroughs!
@RealOCteachers- THANK YOU! I teach it a lot as well. It really is a super important skill to have (though not always the easiest to teach!)
I had good luck teaching summary by having students find the 5Ws and H (who, [did] what, where, when, why, how).
I had much better luck when it became who, [wanted] what, where, when, why and how. The _wanted_ (as you have it) is critical to getting at the character's internal characteristics.
Teaching summary really gets students to the heart of a story :).
So I've never used this format to teach summary writing, but I think all that will soon have to change. We usually spend time making flow maps and plot charts of the story to work on summarizing, but they do have trouble with pulling out unimportant details. Thanks for sharing this!
Kristine--We are living parallel lives (sort of). We're finishing up informational summarization and moving back into fiction, however. I won't lie--it was tricky! The 5th grade CCSS of finding more than one main idea & summarizing is open to all sorts of interpretation. It was good, but HARD. I am beyond thrilled to be returning to the familiar strategy you mention, and even more thrilled to see your example with Among the Hidden! I read it to my kids every year, and we refer back to it all year long. Thanks for sharing your chapter summarization work.
We are preparing for DRA two assessments also. I also use the somebody, wanted, but, so, then, strategy. I swear by it! It helps the kids Get to the heart/Lesson learned of the story so much better than a listing of important events. Thanks for sharing your anchor charts! They are always super cute!
This is great! I just found your blog, and am glad I did! I am currently teaching resource room (mostly push-in, co-teaching) and it is amazing how many of the intermediates (4-6) cannot write a summary!
I will put this item in my wish list because here in Colombia teachers don´t teach how to sumarize. I´ts incredible that you will find college students who doesn´t know how to make a summary. We need to change that. Thanks!
Oxana
Teacher's clipart blog
I have been looking for something to help my kids grasp summarizing and this is perfect! Thanks so much. I can't stop buying your stuff at the TPT store!
Thanks Jenny! That's so kind of you! I'm so glad it helps! :)
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